Nicholas Selk's HEINOUS SOULS
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"So, what did you do while I was at work today," Amanda asked
Connor looked at her and answered, "I finished cleaning my room and then Jacob came over and I played games with him for a little while. When he left, I ate and played more games."
"Sounds about what I figured you would do." Amanda said, then she took a drink and reached for the remote for the TV. She scrolled through the guide a little and stopped on Jerry Springer and turned it on. Neither one of them spoke for a few minutes as they watched. Then someone on the show screamed FUCK! Amanda realized something was wrong. "Why didn't they beep out the bad word?" She thought to herself, so she clicked information on the controller and it said, UNCENCORED. Connor's eyes got big for a second, but he didn't say anything, he waited to see what Amanda was going to do. Then she clicked the OK button and they started watching it again. Connor was surprised, Amanda was laughing and all the sudden she yelled at the TV. "That's what you get, you dumb Bitch!" Connor started to laugh.
Amanda looked at Connor and said, "This show is hilarious!
"I know, this is crazy." Connor said, "I can't believe the stuff they do.”
Then all of a sudden a fight broke out between two girls. Amanda started yelling "Get that bitch!" and finished the rest of her drink. The bouncers broke it up and Amanda said, "What the fuck, that's not right, they should let her kick that girls ass!" Connor just laughed. Then one of the girls got loose and attacked the other girl. Amanda yelled "Yeah, get that Bitch!" All of a sudden one of the girls ripped off the other girl's shirt. Connor saw it and turned away, he wanted to look but didn't know what Amanda would think.
Amanda saw what he did and said, "Oh my god Connor! It's okay to look! You're a boy, that's a girl, trust me, It's okay."
So Connor turned his head and watched the two girls, at this point both girls' shirts were off and the bouncers were trying to break it up. Connor was blushing and smiling.
"You can't tell me you haven't seen boobs on TV before." Amanda said with a strange look on her face.
Connor didn’t know what to say, so he just looked down.
"Look at me when I'm talking to you." Amanda said, with a somewhat stern voice.
Connor looked at Amanda and said, "Yeah, I've seen boobs on TV before, but just not."
"Just not what?" Amanda asked
Connor looked at Amanda and said, "Not with you in the same room, it just seemed a little weird at first."
"Well, It's totally fine." Amanda said as she paused the TV and got off the couch. She spun around and said. "A woman's body is like a work of art, and like I said earlier, you will see tons of boobs in your life. Hell, I've seen a shit ton of tits myself! I think you will be okay."
Connor smiled and said, "I know."
"I have to go to the bathroom." Amanda said as she walked down the hallway.
A few minutes later Amanda came back out and said "I'm gonna make another drink, do you need anything?"
"Yeah." Connor replied, "Can you grab me a pop?"
Amanda said, "Yep, I'll be right back." Amanda picked up her glass and went to the kitchen. A few minutes later she came back and set her glass down and handed Connor his pop.
"Thanks mom." Connor said as Amanda un-paused the TV. "You're welcome." Amanda said
When she sat down on the couch, her shirt pulled in such a way that it was revealing most of her right boob, her nipple was just barely still under her tank top. Connor set his pop on the coffee table and looked over and saw what happened to Amanda's shirt. He sat back and looked back at the T.V. He started wondering "Does she know her shirt is like that? Should I tell her? Not knowing what to say he just stared at the TV.
Just then Amanda sat up and yelled at the TV. "He fucked her sister! Oh my god, I would murder him right on the fucking stage! Men fucking suck!" Connor looked at Amanda with a surprised look on his face.
"Oh my god," Amanda yelled, They did it in her fucking bed! He would be dead for sure! Fucking dead!”
Amanda looked at Connor and said, "You better not ever treat women like that! You treat them with respect at all times! And never cheat on them! Look at me when I'm talking to you!"
Connor looked at Amanda, ironically he was trying not to look down at her boobs that were almost coming out of her shirt, as he said, "I know, I will always respect girls."
"You fucking better! And I mean it! Just then a fight broke out on the show!
"Kick his fucking ass!" Amanda yelled out, "Oh my god, her sister is punching her. These people are fucked up!"
"Why is she hitting her own sister?" Connor asked
"I don't know." Amanda said with a frustrated look on her face, "This show pisses me off sometimes."
"It's pretty crazy, that's for sure! Connor said as one girl ripped off the other girl's shirt.
"I know." Amanda said, "I think this shit is rigged!" She picked up the remote and said, "I think it's time to go to bed." As she turned off the TV.
Connor got up off the couch and said, "Goodnight mom, I'll see you in the morning." As he walked to his room.
Amanda said, "Okay, goodnight Connor." Then she laid her head on the arm of the couch.
Connor got to his room, pulled the blankets back and laid down. Still wide awake, he looked at the clock and said to himself. "Shit it's almost 3:00a.m’, I need to get to sleep. Connor laid on his bed thinking about all the stuff that happened today, he thought to himself. "That was kind of crazy watching boobs on TV with my step mom next to me on the couch." Connor laid in bed for a little while, he couldn't sleep and had to pee a little so he got up and went to the bathroom. When he stepped out of the bathroom he heard a deep dark moan that sounded like it came from the living room. Connor was a little scared as he walked really slow toward the living room. It was dark, but when he got to the living room doorway he could see that Amanda was still laying on the couch. Then all the sudden he heard another deep demonic moan. It sounded like it was coming from the couch. He noticed it was a lot colder than it was earlier, Connor moved closer to the couch to see what was going on. He saw Amanda on the couch and that her shorts were still on but her shirt was almost off and her boobs were out. Not sure what to do, he thought she would probably like to be in her own bed so he decided to try and wake her up. "Mom.. mom.." Connor, trying not to scare her, so he said it in a quiet voice. Then he heard the demonic moan again, It felt so close he could touch it. Connor's heart started racing, the sound was right in front of him. Confused and scared, he saw his breath, it was so cold. He got a little closer and saw Amanda's goosebump covered skin moving. Like fingers and hands were pressing and moving against her body. He saw what looked like four fingers slowly moving from her ankle all the way up her leg and back down. Her boobs were moving around like someone was fondling them. He looked down and he could still see fingers moving all over her body. Connor couldn't believe his eyes, he was scared. "Mom! Mom!" Connor yelled "Mom!" but she didn't hear him. He heard another moan even louder this time, then a cold hand on his chest pushed him back a little. It felt like something was trying to keep him away from her. Amanda's body shook a little and he could still see the fingers moving all over her body. He didn't know what to do, scared for her life, he got right over her and yelled "Mom!" really loud.
Amanda screamed, "What are you doing? Why were you touching me, you little creep?
"I wasn't." Conner said, "I think there is a ghost in the house."
Amanda's face turned angry and she said, "What the fuck! I could feel you touching me as I was waking up!"
"It wasn't me!" Connor exclaimed, "I was trying to help you!"
Just then Amanda sat up, fixed her shirt and smacked Connor as hard as she could, "Go to bed you little fucking pervert! Touching me while I was sleeping!"
"I wasn't," Connor said, and started crying.
Amanda walked over to him and yelled, "You were invading my space, looking at me while I was sleeping, touching me, and you wanna lie to my face and cry? I will give you something to cry about!" Amanda yelled as she smacked Connor hard again, leaving a mark on his nose from her ring.
"Don't fucking lie to me, you're not allowed to touch me like that!" Amanda yelled, "GO TO BED NOW! Before I smack you again!"
Connor, still crying, walked to his room and went to bed.
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At first glance, Heinous Souls might seem like a story about a troubled family. We meet Sebastian and his wife, April, living with April’s parents, Archie and Susannah. Right from the start, we get a sense that the family dynamics are far from normal. Archie’s cruel behavior and Susannah’s unsettling advances on Sebastian paint a picture of a family torn apart by psychological abuse, power plays, and an overwhelming sense of tension. The dysfunctional relationships set the stage for what feels like a ticking time bomb, with the family’s unraveling serving as a precursor to something much darker.
Blending Family Drama with the Supernatural
The beauty of Heinous Souls lies in how Selk takes this very real human conflict and weaves it into a supernatural narrative. Family drama in itself is often unsettling because of its relatability—most people can understand the discomfort of living with a toxic family member or the toll that emotional abuse takes on a person’s well-being. But in Heinous Souls, this already intense psychological pressure is amplified by unexplained, eerie occurrences that suggest the family’s dysfunction isn’t just a product of their behavior—it’s something that has stirred up forces far beyond their control.
A House That Reflects Emotional Decay
This book stands out because the supernatural elements don’t feel like an afterthought or a gimmick added to a standard family drama. Instead, they feel like a natural extension of the trauma the characters are enduring. The strange noises, unsettling presences, and the constant sense of being watched are all rooted in the family’s dysfunction. These supernatural occurrences don’t exist outside the family’s emotional turmoil—they reflect the unresolved anger, jealousy, and fear that haunt these characters.
For example, the eerie noises and strange occurrences around the house aren’t just creepy set pieces—they represent the emotional decay happening within the family. The tension between Sebastian and Archie is palpable, with Archie’s cruel insults and manipulative behavior constantly gnawing at Sebastian’s psyche. This verbal abuse becomes a form of psychic torment, with the house itself seeming to echo these toxic emotions. In a sense, the home becomes a character in its own right—a decaying, oppressive presence that mirrors the emotional decay within the family unit.
The Supernatural as a Mirror for Psychological Trauma
As the story progresses, the supernatural elements become more menacing. The chilling sounds, like the ghostly cries and whispers, don’t just serve as horror tropes; they are rooted in the characters’ inner turmoil. The fear they evoke is not just about what’s haunting the house, but also about the characters’ inability to escape the horrors of their past. In this way, Selk creates a unique hybrid of psychological thriller and horror, where the supernatural becomes a tool for exploring the characters’ deepest fears and traumas.
Another fascinating aspect of Heinous Souls is how the book explores the fine line between what is real and what is imagined. As Sebastian and April begin to experience more bizarre and horrifying events, it becomes unclear whether they are truly being haunted or if the supernatural occurrences are a product of their unraveling mental states. This blurring between psychological breakdown and genuine supernatural terror creates an atmosphere of constant uncertainty, making the reader question what’s real and what’s a manifestation of the characters’ fractured minds.
The Horror of Emotional Abuse
The story’s tension is further fueled by the fact that the supernatural events often happen during the family’s most intense moments of emotional conflict. When the family is at its lowest point, when Sebastian is on the verge of snapping from the constant abuse and manipulation, the eerie occurrences heighten, adding to the chaos. It’s as if the house is feeding off the family’s dysfunction, with each emotional outburst or moment of vulnerability amplifying the supernatural force lurking in the background.
But not just the haunted house or the unsettling noises create a sense of fear. The real horror in Heinous Souls is the emotional and psychological toll that living in such a toxic environment takes on the characters. The emotional abuse, the gaslighting, and the constant psychological manipulation are terrifying in their own right. Selk doesn’t need to use jump scares or gore to create tension. Instead, he builds the horror slowly, methodically, through gradually eroding the characters’ sense of self and their perception of reality.
The Supernatural as a Reflection of Inner Struggles
Heinous Souls ultimately shows us that the most terrifying horrors don’t always come from outside forces. Sometimes, they come from within—the destructive forces of family, manipulation, and guilt. The supernatural elements in the book are the outward expression of these internal struggles, and they heighten the horror that the characters are already experiencing on an emotional level. The supernatural doesn’t just exist in the story’s world—it reflects the characters’ inner lives, made manifest in the most terrifying of ways.
Conclusion: A Thrilling Fusion of Genres
In conclusion, Heinous Souls is a masterclass blending psychological drama with supernatural horror. By using family dysfunction as the foundation for the supernatural events, Nicholas Selk creates a unique and gripping narrative that explores the darkest corners of the human psyche. The book’s seamless blend of psychological tension and supernatural terror makes for a reading experience that is both thought-provoking and chilling, leaving readers questioning the nature of reality and the horrors that lie beneath the surface of family life. If you’re a fan of stories that mix real-world emotional depth with supernatural thrills, Heinous Souls is a book you won’t want to miss.
In Nicholas Selk’s thrilling horror story, Heinous Souls, the true terror doesn’t come from ghosts, monsters, or the supernatural forces that haunt the story. Instead, the most chilling aspect of the book lies in its human antagonists: Archie and Susannah. These two characters may not have the traditional traits of horror villains, but they serve as a potent reminder that sometimes the real monsters in a story are the people we are forced to live with.
From the start, Heinous Souls sets the tone for a psychological and emotional battle that Sebastian, the protagonist, faces while living with his wife, April parents. The house they live in, soaked in neglect, decay, and cruelty, becomes central to the story’s horror. But what makes the environment so truly oppressive isn’t just the physical decay—it’s the actions of Archie and Susannah, whose abusive behavior turns what should be a place of refuge into a suffocating, nightmarish prison.
Archie: The Tyrant Behind the Torment
Archie is the epitome of toxic masculinity, and his treatment of Sebastian, the son-in-law, is downright brutal. He isn’t just an abusive figure—he’s a manipulator, a bully, and a man who gets his kicks from tormenting those around him. His constant verbal assaults are designed to break Sebastian down, using humiliating insults, threats, and cruel taunts. From calling Sebastian demeaning names to making snide remarks about his manhood, Archie’s cruelty is relentless.
But what makes Archie so terrifying is not just his overt abuse—it’s the psychological warfare he wages. He keeps Sebastian trapped in a constant state of fear and anxiety, threatening to destroy his life with false stories or accusations. It’s clear that Archie is a man who thrives on control and manipulation, and his power comes from Sebastian’s inability to fight back effectively. Sebastian’s attempts to stand up for himself are met with more cruelty, leading to an overwhelming sense of helplessness.
Archie’s behavior doesn’t just directly impact Sebastian—it casts a dark shadow over the entire family dynamic. His actions drive a wedge between Sebastian and his wife, April, who is caught between her loyalty to her father and her relationship with her husband. While not as abusive as Archie, April is complicit in her father’s cruelty. Her failure to protect Sebastian from Archie’s attacks adds to Sebastian’s emotional weight throughout the story. This toxic environment makes the house they live in an actual horror show, not because of ghosts, but because of the real human suffering caused by Archie’s actions.
Susannah: The Silent Predator
While Archie is the loud, outwardly cruel villain of Heinous Souls, Susannah’s role as the antagonist is subtler but just as menacing. She is a woman whose actions are both manipulative and disturbing, using her proximity to Sebastian to create an atmosphere of unease and fear. Unlike Archie, Susannah doesn’t overtly lash out with insults and threats; instead, she relies on her inappropriate advances and twisted behavior to keep Sebastian trapped in an even more insidious form of psychological torment.
At first, Susannah’s behavior seems to be little more than a strange quirk—her lewd comments and inappropriate gestures appear to be just a part of her eccentric personality. But as the story progresses, the true horror of her actions is revealed. She begins to sexually harass Sebastian, making unwanted advances that become more aggressive over time. The horror here isn’t just physical; it’s the power imbalance and the emotional manipulation Susannah wields. She can cross boundaries and make Sebastian feel powerless, twisting his sense of right and wrong.
What makes Susannah especially chilling is that she operates in a gray area. Her behavior isn’t overtly violent, yet it is deeply violating. She uses her physical proximity and her knowledge of Sebastian’s vulnerability to corner him emotionally and psychologically. She doesn’t need to harm him to cause immense damage physically—her ability to create an atmosphere of constant discomfort and fear is enough to push him to the brink. In many ways, Susannah’s abuse is even more horrifying than Archie’s because it takes on a more subtle, manipulative form.
Creating the Oppressive Environment
Archie and Susannah create a toxic environment where Sebastian is constantly on edge. The house, which should have been a haven, becomes a suffocating prison. The physical decay of the house mirrors the emotional decay that Sebastian experiences at the hands of these two characters. The house feels like a living, breathing entity that thrives on the cruelty and dysfunction of the people inside it. With each insult from Archie and every uncomfortable moment with Susannah, the walls of this house close in on Sebastian, trapping him in a nightmare of psychological and emotional abuse.
What makes their actions so horrifying is that they aren’t motivated by traditional “villainous” goals like greed or power—they don’t want anything from Sebastian except to break him down. A desire for control and superiority drives their actions, and, in Susannah’s case, an unsettling sense of entitlement. They aren’t merely antagonists; they are predators who prey on vulnerability, and their cruelty isn’t just a means to an end—it is the end itself. The more they break Sebastian down, the more they derive satisfaction from watching him suffer.
The True Monsters of the Story
In Heinous Souls, Archie and Susannah are the actual monsters, not because of their size or strength, but because of their ability to manipulate and control others. They don’t need supernatural powers or violent tendencies to create terror. The real horror comes from their emotional and psychological abuse, which leaves scars that run much deeper than any physical wound. The suffocating environment they create in their home is one of isolation, manipulation, and fear. This horror isn’t just felt in the dark corners of the house but in every interaction between the characters.
As we read the story, we see that the real monsters are not the supernatural forces that haunt Sebastian—they are the people he is forced to live with. Archie and Susannah remind us of the very real dangers of toxic relationships, manipulation, and abuse. Their actions force Sebastian into constant fear, leaving him no safe space to retreat. While the supernatural may seem like the primary threat, the actions of these two villains create horror in Heinous Souls.
Ultimately, Heinous Souls shows us that sometimes the most terrifying monsters live in plain sight—those who hide behind the mask of family, love, and familiarity. Archie and Susannah are not just antagonists; they embody the psychological terror that haunts the human soul. Their cruelty isn’t just in what they do—it’s in how they make us question how much we’re willing to tolerate before we can escape their grip.
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